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paper golem page 1 by vsurprise paper golem page 1 by vsurprise
This is the first page of a 20 page comic that i am drawing and writing. This is my first stab at doing comics since I was 12 so any advice helps ^___^

The idea for this page is that wind blows through an abandoned library opening an old magical book releasing a paper golem.
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demondreamerblood Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm just an art student so I don't think I can give useful advise, but this page has beautiful composition.
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vsurprise Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Artist
thank you ^__^
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joolita Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
The page is fab, I hope the story which follows is going to be interesting. :D I love how you made the golem shine.
The page speaks for itself, there was no need for you to explain what is going on and I think this is an advice I can give: make sure no future page requires an explanation :) Comics are narration through picture and I hate when there is too many explanations on the page itself (in the text bubbles) or under the page, because I feel that the author failed to use the possibilities of expression the comic art offers. :)
So in short, good luck with the future pages, I'm looking forward to them.
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vsurprise Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Artist
Thank you!
I'll resist the temptation to explain everything next time. ^___^
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